We're back in Europe today and visiting Lausanne, a small but vibrant university city in Switzerland. It is exactly the sort of place I might have ended up in when I was interrailing in 2008, so in that spirit, today's story is about two interrailers. I would like to point out that my interrailing companion would never have been as cruel as Libby. I might be, though :)
Lausanne
They stood at the top of the Sauvabelin Tower, the winding streets of Lausanne laid out before them.
"Can we go back down now, please?" Jess begged. Libby shook her head, the green streaks in her blonde hair swirling around her small face.
"No. You haven't confronted your fear yet."
"I am on holidays. Why am I confronting my fears?"
"Because our next stop is Paris and I am not climbing the Eiffel Tower on my own. You need to face up to this."
"I am on top of a tower made out of sticks. What more do you want?"
"Look out. Look down at the terrace." Libby began to snap pictures of the view. "Shall I take one to prove you've been up here?"
Libby took Jess's grimace as assent and aimed her camera at Jess. She had more sense than to ask her to smile.
Thanks for reading - the rest of my flash fiction world tour can be accessed by clicking the tag below this entry. PS - this is the view that faces Jess if she manages to inch her way to the edge. . .


Sometimes I find coming back down was more difficult than going up!!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely! I'm very bad with heights myself so I feel Jess's pain here!
DeleteSo clever, this. I enjoyed reading it and love your blog.
ReplyDeleteIf you've the time, take a look at my blog. I'm the author of the Bella and Britt series for kids.
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for the kind words Nancy, looking forward to visiting you blog :) Glad you enjoyed the post!
DeleteWell that's certainly a novel way to treat fear of heights! The tower "made of sticks" is amazing!
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It's a very cool looking tower, but as someone who doesn't like heights I'd find it a little scary myself!
DeleteI've joined you for the first time in Lausanne and have been intrigued enough to check your earlier A-Z posts. Flash fiction is not easy to keep up each day for a month but you have held my attention; I'll be back to read some more.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Bob, I'm glad you enjoyed the fiction. I'm mostly writing it day-to-day but the first three or four were written a few days before the challenge started. Working day-to-day is very tough but always fun.
Deletenice little story! and thanks for the comment, I will hold you to that! :P
ReplyDeleteThanks, Steph!
DeleteOoh, daily location-based microfiction. Not only can I be entertained, but I can entertain the idea of being a world traveler again. Nice.
ReplyDeleteOf course, now all I want to do is stand atop a tower of sticks.
Nate, that's the main reason I'm doing this microfiction world tour, it's a great way to enjoy learning about places :)
DeleteI'm slightly scared of heights but I had a similar impulse when I saw this tower!
Hi Ellen:
ReplyDeleteDelightfully flash.
Here from A-Z and your blog is a pleasure!
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Thanks WWW, lovely to meet you!
DeleteI'm a big fan of flash fiction, and really enjoyed your story. Stopping by from A - Z Challenge. Have a wonderful weekend:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by :) Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteThank you for your flash fiction... very nice :)
ReplyDeleteyou're very welcome, glad you liked it :)
DeleteVertigo! One can get through life without confronting some fears;-)
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I think Jess would like to try! But you're right, fear is the spice of life :)
DeleteGreat job! I'd love to see that view in person. By the way, what's pink tea?
ReplyDeletePink tea is my name for berry and fruit flavoured teas, which I started drinking a few years ago when I gave up caffeine. I'm mostly a camomile or peppermint girl now but the blog already has its name!
DeletePoor Libby. I can empathise with her. Being atop a tower doesn't scare me, but I do have a fear of heights!
ReplyDeleteJ.C. Martin
A to Z Blogger
I hate small heights especially - the standing-on-a-chair variety! Thanks for visiting :)
DeleteGood flash fiction, Ellen!
ReplyDeleteThat tower is one I'd love to go up!
Thanks William - it's not very tall but it's certainly distinctive! I'm in Canada on Monday.
DeleteHi...I'm hopping over from the A to Z challenge...lovely blog...good luck with the challenge!
ReplyDeleteDonna L Martin
www.donasdays.blogspot.com
Thanks Donna, glad you like the blog :)
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