Welcome back to the A-Z Challenge - I'm writing microfiction themed around a different place each day. After our visit to Bamberg in Germany yesterday, today we're off to London; specifically, to Chelsea Physic Garden, which was founded in 1673 as a research garden for the Worshipful Society of Apothecaries (isn't that a brilliant name?) and is now open to the public.
Chelsea Physic Garden
Grapefruit. The very word sounded heavy and rich with possibility.
Aaron glanced left, then right. His dad was pointing at something or other, his mum was nodding. They did that a lot.
The fruit hung above Aaron, like a pale orange.
'These,' his father had said, in his best lecturer voice, 'are the northernmost-growing grapefruit in the world. Imagine that, Aaron - no grapefruit from here to the North Pole.'
Aaron pictured a sign - 'North Pole: No Grapefruit til London SW3.'
His parents had walked on, but Aaron stayed under the grapefruit, looking.
He'd stolen apples before, from the low-hanging tree in his neighbour's garden. This could be his only shot at grapefruit, ever.
He glanced around again.
I really liked this! Especially his notion of a sign that says 'no grapefruit from here to london' LOL. Lots said with little words! Great job!
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DeleteOh wow!! Loved this story - loved it!! Bad Aaron!! yay! Take care
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Kitty, thanks for the suggestion - I'd never heard of Chelsea Physic Garden til you suggested it and I honestly could have written lots of pieces about it! Cheers again for telling me about such an interesting place.
DeleteAbsolutely gorgeous writing. I hope you're doing something more with this.
ReplyDeleteI think this may be the end of my involvement in Aaron's story! Part of me wants him to steal a grapefruit and part of me thinks he should leave them untouched for other visitors to look at. . . :)
Deleteloving your a-z so far. pretty awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks :D Glad you like it.
DeleteDear Ellen:
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like furistic stuff. Pretty much what's happeing now. In the state of Florida, we no longer see the citrus trees along the highways and countryroads. It's sad, really.
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Oops! Looks like a spelled futuristic totally wrong.
DeleteIt does a little, but it's definitely set in the present - apparently climates in Northern Europe are too cold for grapefruit to grow, but somehow they've cultivated some in central London, which I love :)
DeleteWhat a great story! I always admire the people who choose to do microfiction for the challenge. I might have to give that a try next year. :-)
ReplyDelete~Marie
Ramblings of a Daydreamer
It's fun, Marie, but it is tough!
DeleteInteresting microstory. Temptation comes in all forms, doesn't it? Like the fruit in Genesis, just hanging there. Thanks for the story. Ruby
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Ruby, glad you liked the story.
DeleteNo Aaron, no!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting, I stopped by your blog too :)
DeleteI wanted to see his reaction if he took the forbidden fruit!
ReplyDeleteErin
That's the thing about flash fiction - you get to shove some of the imaginative work on to the reader :) I could get used to this. . . !
DeleteOh, now I want to know if he does take it. Great story. :)
ReplyDeleteThe Golden Eagle
The Eagle's Aerial Perspective
Glad you liked it!
DeleteI am really enjoying your microfiction. I honestly never knew so much could be said in such few words.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I'm so glad you're enjoying them :)
DeleteVery cute. This is a good idea for posts where people will be trying to look at lots of blogs. I'm trying to visit them all during the A-Z Challenge.
ReplyDeleteIt's so hard to visit them all, isn't it? I appreciate you finding time to stop by :)
DeleteOoh this is so neat! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sangita :)
DeleteVery good, Ellen!
ReplyDeleteLoving the micro-fiction with such interesting settings!
ReplyDeleteFor a long-form young adult book with this very Physic Garden at its heart (along with Russian spies and the Hollywood blacklist of the 1950s), look at Maile Maloy's The Apothecary - my review (no spoilers) at http://booksyalove.blogspot.com/2012/02/apothecary-fiction.html
Happy A-to-Z-ing!
**Katy M
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